Next month will be the yaoi page, coming out on the second just like this, and after that will be the first page of the yuri comic, and finally the first page of the bi comic. December marked the first of these with “Chi-Chi the Sitter”, the straight comic of this group, and here is the first page of that. I’ll be doing one “straight”, one “yaoi”, one yuri” and one “bi/pan” comic, with the four rotating each month with a new page.
Obviously I can’t do four comics per month, though, and instead they will work in rotation. I wanted to do them differently this time around, though, and instead of one comic I work on for about a year, we’re instead trying out doing four separate ongoing comics. I had done ongoing comics as a reward on Patreon in the past, and they’re basically just like the One-Shots I do except the pages form an ongoing story (as the name suggests). It's like they barely care about their characters at all except for Trunks being dominant (which is a given because he's older/taller/has-lighter-colored-hair).After I hit a certain goal on my SubscribeStar, I had pledge to bring back ongoing comics as a reward on that platform. ChiChi and Bulma find them in the morning and Vegeta is standing nearby all upset because of the obvious circumstances. Eventually, they give up because they can't seem to do it properly, and then just go to sleep naked. The whole thing is muddled because Trunks keeps suggesting ridiculous Japanese sound-effects for what they need to do next. So he tries to emulate yaoi by tickling Goten's chest to make him hard, which doesn't do a damn thing, of course.
This other one I have (four pages, only nudity no sex) has Trunks saying that he and Goten should have sex because (in willful destruction of the fourth wall) the comic they are currently in is an adult comic. :Pĭecem07:47 - Reply Anonymous 8 (2): There are all of three Trunks/Goten hentai comics in existance, and ALL of them have utterly terrible writing.
The thing over his dick translates roughly to "oops" or "uh oh." In the last panel, Trunks is just yelling at Goten about how to position himself and what to do with his arm. He then says he's going to write about it in a book of some sort, and then Goten says "ホソト かなあ", or "hosoto ka nā." This one has me a bit stumped so far the best I can make of it is "I wish I were outside." I can't be sure if that's right, though. In the third panel, Trunks says "Silly, I'll be gentle until you are used to it." I may be paraphrasing horribly. It's just common sense." Goten's reply is "I will. His second bubble in that panel says, "Common sense. I believe in the first panel, Goten is indeed asking what to do, because in the second panel, Trunks replies, basically, 'follow my lead' (I think it reads "let the older one lead." Google is no help "Our Relaxation Before Dahlonega Such is the (Into the older) Shall determine (The wait) The I?"). Granted, I think it's appropriate (and I suppose cute) that Trunks is taking the lead like that, but the whole thing's a bit much, in my opinion.Īnyway, I stared at it a bit more. Decem02:06 - Reply snytenon: Yeah, which is why I wasn't really fond of the translation myself.